Good work. Keep doing your own thing, you have potential.
Potential as a septic tank cleaner maybe :-p
Should have been more to it
This was good, funny, and stylish for all it's simplicity. Put in a little more effort next time and you will do well.
Mr Derp: Thanks Champ
Techneon: Well very minimal effort was put into this movie, hopefully the next will be longer
your choice of music could not have been better.
the toon was funny and fun to watch. short, sweet, and enjoyable. good job!
I thought it was funny...
and i never even played everquest. i think you have potential, and your future work will be worth looking out for. (make me glad I said that)
I think you could develop your characters with a sequel, and then set out to make a game, where instead of just clicking NEXT you could choose some responses, kinda like that Ray pt1 game. (shrug)
good try though, keep at it.
Thank you! Yeah -- I could have different outcomes for different choices! I think I'm on to something here. Now -- What to do for graphics... (shrug) I'm still taking notes... Thanx for the review!
this is not FLASH
it's not really that funny, maybe it would have been if we could actually hear the sounds. Still this is not flash animation, just throwing together a video. share this somewhere else.
Well, I apologize. The sound is poor because it's a survelliance tape, and I'm sure that the mechanism isn't up to date.
Yes, it isn't animation.. But you'd have hated it more if I'd have made a cartoon based on this. Oh well.
decent skating, crap presentation
This wasn't really flash. This would have been better if you didn't show the same scenes over and over, and the audio sucked. There's some cool scenes, nice jumps, but it gets repetitive and not something I'd want to watch again.
On the other hand, if you try to make the video more interesting next time....splice in some animation, or add color effects to the surroundings. You could do better....try again!
decent little vid
this was good, not great. it was well-done and basic, not a masterpiece. bla bla
middle of the road, could have been better.... but I still liked it. worth the watch.
try harder next time.
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